Developmental Editing

Did you know that readers are more likely to forgive grammatical errors as long as the story is engaging? A solid plot with believable characters is crucial to a good book, and I would love to help make yours just that.

I’m Jinx, a developmental editor specializing in romance and fantasy. With this service, I’ll analyze character arcs, tension, narrative structure, and more. My goal is to elevate your story so it keeps readers hooked and eager to turn each page.

You will receive feedback on topics such as:

  • Character Development

  • Tropes

  • Tension

  • Structure

  • Pacing and Flow

  • Dialogue

  • Descriptions

  • Point of View

  • Setting and Worldbuilding

  • Magic Systems and Lore (if applicable)

  • Conflict and Motivation

  • Head Hopping

  • Show vs Tell

  • Genre Expectations

I’ll read your manuscript multiple times, leaving in-line comments to highlight areas for improvement and praise strengths. I’ll also write an editorial letter covering big-picture elements to help guide you through your next draft.

The editing phase can be intimidating, but I always aim to motivate and encourage. I’ll cheer you on and support your success while helping you give your readers the experience they crave.


  • Investment: $0.02 per word

  • Turnaround time: Can vary between 4 to 6 weeks for full-length manuscripts. Weekly updates are provided while working together.

Learn more about me and my qualifications.

Think we're a good fit? Contact me and let’s work together!

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Rates are based on the EFA rate chart

The Process:

If you’re interested in working with me, please fill out my contact form. From there, we can go over your story and goals to make sure we’re a good fit (I bet we will be!).

Once we decide to move forward, I’ll send a contract for you to review, which will include a confidentiality clause for your comfort and protection. After it’s signed, a 20% booking deposit will be collected to reserve your spot. I’ll invoice 40% when I receive the manuscript, with the remaining 40% due upon completion of the work.

Payments are processed through PayPal.

Testimonials

  • Wow wow wow. Jinx is the gold standard of dev editing and beta reading. The only thing I regret is not coming across her services sooner! She helped me salvage a manuscript which I honestly wanted to scrap and reassured me that there was good bones and characterization there. Her feedback was not only helpful for the points I had concern over, but will also help me improve my writing in the long run when thinking about editing / writing in the future. Professional and great communication throughout as well. I HIGHLY recommend her and look forward to using her services again in the future!

    - susu_32

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